It’s time to say thank you to my loyal readers who have been following me for a while, I couldn’t be here without your support and kindness.
It’s also time to welcome my new subscribers. That includes you, looking at my blog for the first time today.
This is a Writing Happiness giveaway: a chance for TWO lucky people to win a highly personalized, free critique for their blogs.
The prize – Free Full Length Blog Critiques for TWO
What each will contain.
An Analysis of the First impressions
Did you know that every first time visitor makes a decision – within first 3 SECONDS – if they like your blog or not. Are you doing everything right to get your message across?
This section will include a review of your blog title, your tag line, the chosen theme, design and usability elements, USP, social proof etc.
Suggestions for improvements.
An in-depth Discussion of your Content
Ok so now that you have the visitor’s attention, have you got what it takes for them to visit your blog again? To even become a subscriber? It’s all about the content.
Helping you to identify who are you writing for and rethink your blog purpose.
A discussion of your post titles; are they doing their job?
How does your writing compare in the genre of web writing. Is it scannable, benefit driven, key word friendly?
Consolidating everything so it comes together with a central cohesiveness – giving it that wow factor.
Suggestions for improvements.
Promotion Strategies
Simple things you can do to promote your blog. You don’t have to be a social butterfly, I am not.
What it will not contain.
How to optimize your blog for SEO, how to improve your graphics. I will advise on what you need to do as a blog writer. The focus will be on the content.
If you go around the market, they cost anywhere between $99. 00 to $300.00. You get this for free – just to say thank you for being such an awesome reader! 🙂
Here is How
All you have to do is …
1. Like Writing Happiness Facebook page (http://www.facebook.com/WritingHappiness) If you already are a fan, leave a comment saying you would like a free critique.
2. Tweet this post. Don’t forget @WritingH mention.
2 simple steps – under 20 seconds.
Then leave a comment here saying you have done these things and you would like a critique.
The giveaway will run for a week, finishing on Tuesday, Nov 29, 2011.
I will do a draw on Nov 30 and pick TWO winners. The winners would be announced on the blog.
I will also contact you and let you know. If you have any specific questions related to your content, you can email them to me and I will include them in the critique.
I will email the document to you as a pdf format. In case you agree, I might consider publishing the critique as a Writing Happiness post thus bringing you some publicity as well.
If there is anything else you need clarification with AFTER the critique has been done, I am happy to get back to you via email.
That’s it.
This is my way of saying an extra thank you to my readers who always help spread the word about it too.
Now hop over to my Facebook page and twitter. Don’t forget to leave a comment after this post. Best of luck! 🙂
New to Writing Happiness? Subscribe here to get all the goodness in your inbox. Like, right now! 🙂 Cheers.
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Welcome!
Hi, this is Marya. I am a Facebook Ad & Content Strategist. I help you to promote your program or coaching package with confidence using Facebook ads.
Together, we will create ad strategies to attract hot leads and sell your ecourse, coaching program or service package by the bucketloads .. that’s the plan.
Are you in? 🙂

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Karen Says :
Tweeted and left a facebook comment! 2012 is the year I sort out my blog. An in-depth critique would really help 🙂 By the way, I just love ‘Marya’s Truths’. One of the things that really caught my attention the first time I landed here at Writing Happiness.
marya
Hi Karen. great to hear from you. So glad you like my truths. When I moved from my personal blog to Writing Happiness, the general advice seemed to suggest to take them off – I didn’t. I think, for anyone visiting my blog for the first time, its a great way for them to know me at a glance. It tells them who am I as a person and what my values are and how my truths will continue to make an appearance throughout my posts. Thanks so much, it really uplifted my mood to read your words today. Cheers 🙂
Marya
Carol Zombo Says :
Hi Marya, I just discovered your blog yesterday and today I see this opportunity for a critique! I tweeted the post and liked your blog on Facebook both as BlogRehab.com and WritingTipsNewsletter.com. I would love a critique! Thanks!
Carol Zombo
marya
Hi Carol, welcome! 🙂
I thought this might encourage some new readers and lurkers to make themselves known, seems to be working. 🙂 Best of luck.
Marya
Barry R. Silver Says :
Marya,
I’m in but I must tell you I’m a little unhappy about having to tweet the contest, since it might reduce my chance to win. Happy Thanksgiving to a heckuva a great writer and blogger.
marya
Hi Barry. It’s always a delight to hear from you mate. 🙂 My regular readers do get something extra – even if they don’t win, I might still be persuaded to do a critique for them because I love them so much. Thanks for your kind words – exactly what I needed to hear today.
Marya
Ali Says :
That’s fancy 🙂 Count me in as well…
marya
You are in! Best of luck Ali.
Catherine Says :
Well I’m a fan and I’ll tweet BUT I”m not a FB fan as of yet. I’m not sure I ever will be. You’ve helped me with our last contact and I will do the homework you suggested.
You can update your profile to “Writing Coach”
marya
Hi Catherine, thank you so much for your kind words. I always love hearing from you.
Don’t worry about the FB. You are in! Best of luck. 🙂
Marya
Your comment made my day! :))
Justin | Personal Growth Says :
Hi Marya,
This is an awesome ideas to offer to your readers. Many of us think that our blog is the best but it is always best to get an honest and real point of view from another pro.
marya
Thank you Justin. Are you interested?
Marya
Praveen Rajarao Says :
Hi Marya
FB- liked
Twitter – tweeted
Would love to have my blog picked to get the experts opinions.
marya
Hey Praveen, good to see you again. Best of luck.
Pssst, there are a few people who will still get a mini critique even if they don’t win because I promised them some time ago. Your chances are very good! 🙂
Many thanks.
Marya
Praveen Rajarao Says :
Alright..am all excited about this already. Will be good to think of a complete makeover for my blog. Thanks Marya.
Guulo Says :
Done, not just for the critque purpose (although that is added bonus), but I enjoy your blog and want to support it. Cheers 🙂
marya
Thanks so much Guulo, and also for leaving your lovely comment on write to done blog. Really appreciate it.
Marya
Ruth - The Freelance Writing Blog Says :
Done, done and…done! Fingers crossed that I’m the winner Marya.
marya
Hi Ruth. I am so humbled that you are considering me to review your blog. 🙂 I hope you win too, and just not here, over at write to done. Congrats for receiving so many nominations, you deserve it! Best of luck. 🙂
Marya
Farouk Says :
very good idea Marya : )
marya
Glad you approve Farouk. 🙂
Kelly Hall
Damn, here goes my chance to win to free review. I am still working on my blog and haven’t lauched it.
Great to see nominations for you over at write to done blog for Top 10 writing sites. I have added mine. Hope you win.
Kelly
marya
Thanks for your comment and also for nominating me at write to done’s competition. Like I said in my reply over there, time to start your blog NOW! 🙂
Marya
Ezekel Says :
Done! Would love to have you review my blog Marya(www.ezekelalan.com). The invitation is open to anyone else who has the time and interest! Thanks for the opportunity. And I too enjoy your blog
marya
Thank you Ezekel. Nice to meet you. 🙂
Marya
Rohan Says :
It would be definitely great if I can get critique for my blog. It will definitely help me to improve my blog quality.
marya
And you need to to is do the two things to go into the draw. Best of luck.
Carrie Says :
Although I would be very nervous and anxious for an honest critique of my newest blog, I thought “Why not?” I never win giveaways 🙂 Nice to meet you and I’m a new facebook follower!
marya
Hi Carrie. Actually it doesn’t have to be public if you are nervous about that, I can email it to you if you win. Also, I promise to be very gentle. Best of luck. 🙂
Marya
Pat Iyer Says :
I’m happy to discover a writer’s blog and the list of writing blogs. Thanks to Barry Silver, I found out about the contest. I maintain four blogs and would love a critique.
marya
Hi Pat, welcome! 🙂 All you need to enter is to like the writing happiness fan page and tweet the post itself. That’s it. Best of luck.
And thanks Barry for spreading the word. 🙂
Marya
Rob From Amersfoort Says :
Your blog is very inspirational. You now even got me to tweet and to update my facebook, so again I was finally forced to learn a new things. Also your constant nagging (in a nice way) about a decent ‘about me’ page really helped, so thanks!
marya
Thank you Rob. I am happy to take any credit for my nagging if it got you to make a few changes. Well done. Hope it gets you the results you hope for.
Regards,
Marya
Liz@LastChanceTraining Says :
HI Marya,
I’m already a FB fan and will tweet this one out. As a new blogger, I would love any tips that you can give me. I really appreciate it!
Thanks,
Liz N
marya
Thanks very much Liz, and also being the first one to nominate me as Top 10 Writing Blogs over at Write to Done. Hoping we both win – wouldn’t that be something? Best of luck. 🙂
Marya
Liz@LastChanceTraining Says :
Yes, winning for both of us would be a pretty nice Christmas present!
Kerryn Says :
Hi Marya, what a great prize! Enter me in the draw please. 🙂
marya
Thanks Kerry. Just in time! Best of luck. 🙂
Sonya Says :
What a great prize!! I know my blog needs help so count me in please. FB & Twitter done. Thanks so much. 🙂
marya
Thank you Sonya. Best of luck and hope to see you hang around in future as well … 🙂
Marya
Ali Says :
hey, did you announce the results?
marya
Sorry for the unexpected delay Ali, (fell ill), will do a post shortly announcing the winners – and a surprise too. Watch this space .. 🙂
marya
Hi everyone,
In case you are not a subscriber (yet) (and why not?), the two winners are
Karen and Carrie.
Congratulations to you both. Will get in touch with email later today!